I think I'll settle on this, for the current revision. “I think it’s beautiful.” “It is, but it still feels wrong.” He swept his arm out over...
@Suzuzu @Naomasa298 @SapereAude I love your suggestions! They are all going in my notes. Thank you :)
This particular conversation is happening while two people are walking. I have other conversations where they are riding in a wagon. I can only...
I am getting really frustrated with writing hand gestures as action beats. It's so hard to do without sounding clumsy or wordy. The problem...
I have a handful of sex scenes in my series, and on the earlier revisions, I experienced the same problem UNTIL someone suggested matching the...
Omg why didn't I think of that? It's so good! I love it. Thank you for this. I'll definitely use it in the future :)
Here's the WIP. A veteran soldier is bearing down on them. Rat is a mage, desperately seeking a source of power for his magic. ***** Rat held his...
I will try all the suggestions in context and see which one produces the right effect, pace, and subtext. Thanks everyone!
So many good points and ideas to explore. I've missed you guys :) (It's been a while)
*facepalm* That makes sense. Thank you.
I agree. Thank you! I will be using the corrected version. This is part of a character's thoughts in a scene in a fantasy novel.
"The horses, the young man, and the soldier; they all burned with rich life energy." Prowritingaid says the semicolon is incorrect. Specifically...
Separate names with a comma.