I see the difference now, your sentence reads much better. I think understanding that will increase the quality of my writing. Thanks :).
I see what you mean madhoca. I'll try explaining what I meant by the "too..." part. The thing is, Lynn is an assassin posing as a singer. Kyle...
The passages related to my question will be followed by a *. Kyle was about to reply when he felt a hand on his shoulder. "Accusing me of...
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