I agree with Jannert. There just doesn't sound enough problem here. The problems need to increase and increase to add interest. The interracial...
I have two methods that work really well. The first is talk to them. You can interview them, or you can get them to write a monologue, it's really...
Would it make a massive difference to change the relationship a little? For example could it be his mother? I think that would be a fascinating...
You need to make sure she has some redeeming features. Yes, this character might not be someone that you would have round for tea, but is there...
Redrafting is the key. The first time I write something it is derivative swill. And I don't care. I want to get through the draft quickly. Then I...
I think you've got to sort out how deserving the character is. That is very subjective but there are certain things that most people agree with....
What about mutts (mutated), scabs (referring to characteristics scabs on the body), C1s (reffering to the cell they originally came from). If...
I think anything that makes your characters feel like real people will work. Nobody wants Theseus and the Minotaur any more. We want living,...
The answer to this question could be the defining mystery of the story. Yes, I think a man, no matter how hardened, would possibly protect a weak...
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