I see where you're coming from. That's fine. You seem to be a fine writer, so I do hope you post some excerpts in the review section for us to see!
Not sure if it was on this site or another, but one review I recieved for my novel excerpt was that it was too HP-y. I think it is necessary to...
I think this would definitely work better on Earth, simply because the reader will be much more intrigued than if it happened elsewhere. Keep up...
I use my head, meanings, astrological signs, and mixing Spanish/French words to make a name.
Graveyard of Heroes: 673 (restarted the whole novel with a MUCH better concept)
Separate names with a comma.