In fact, could you approach this from a different angle? Could the character know where it's safe to dive not because they've been there before,...
The other thing to remember is that water has a magnifying effect - it's approximately 10% in sea water, and presumably the same in fresh water...
I think if the lake's new to them, the best way to show familiarity with the environment is for them to not do what you're suggesting (sorry!)....
Thanks GingerCoffee - I think that was the conclusion we'd come to as well, so it helps to know we were thinking along the right lines.
Does it matter what the sport is? The issue is that the club, (which is actually known as a league, but that's confusing for people in the UK...
Ask him what they call it when someone gets hold of their phone for example and posts a status on FB using their log on - this is almost always...
Doubleheaders are absolutely the norm in this sport, which is not mainstream, so fans need to know it isn't one because otherwise they will moan...
What's the general consensus, should 'single header' be hyphenated or not? The context is for a sports match press release I've just written:...
Rape culture has to a certain extent become normalised whatever culture you're in - the person who said their college age son said it wasn't in...
Could you not just have him on a shift pattern which happens to mean he's not at work during a full moon? Loads of jobs have odd shift patters -...
Did you see the show he did on BBC Two back in Feb? It was a one-off programme called A Night with the Stars, and it was truly brilliant. Shame it...
I'd do a repeat of the months I spent living in the USA where I got to indulge my hobby under the guidance of a brilliant trainer. I don't think...
Well, that's a despondent note to end on ;)
That implies a good deal of self-awareness in the editing process though - not sure I know enough to know what's improving and, well, what isn't....
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