Very often the title and plot are born at the same time for me, like "Titan" I named because it takes place on the moon of Titan, or "Unknown",...
I think you're really breaking this down to the point where you're analyzing thoughts I never had. I just suggested that he simply display the two...
As a reviewer, I'm not one to throw treats for something anyone can do. I give compliments if the writer did something I think was very well...
No. There's a difference between making a reader want to read more to learn more and confusing a reader so much they have to feel like they need...
Don't write her as being annoying.
I kill a lot of characters. It's not necessarily something I do just for the sake of it, but just seems to be the natural way my stories progress....
This question seems kind of silly. Something this massive happens in the world everyone will be up in arms about it. The media will be reporting...
The only problem here is that pegging the healer for a death sentence is the obvious ploy. Healers in any story almost always exist more as a...
My girlfriend half-assed broke up with me because she doesn't know how she feels. Our relationship was fine, but now she's in college and she...
I vote for both. Seriously, you're molding your story. You decide, someone has to die, and then you pick characters who can die. Clearly, if...
Then initial shock is well warranted and would play to the advantage of the plot. Subsequent emotions as stated before should include anger,...
This is about forced love, after all. When did I suggest something as stupid as that? Explicitly telling the reader anything is the first step...
Right. I was basing my response on his post. And solely on the information he already gave us about the story.
Sure, considering how writing books and writing movies are two completely different mediums. I thought it was funny how you called writing a...
Separate names with a comma.
