From my gun-knowing fiance: The classic American gun is the Colt .45, but it's not exactly subtle. The other thing you could use is the H&K Mk.23...
I think i would depend a lot on some other aspects, is he sarcastic and ironic, does he appreciate pop culture? the idea of "Kurt CoCain" came to...
I just read through both stories for the first time, so this is a very virgin impression for you. Perhaps like what a contest judge would want? I...
You could have them look at clocks at a post office, too. Or give the times in GMT as well as standard Or mention something like "Half a world...
I think she was confusing hierarchy with "higher up" perhaps, in which case it would be bad word choice, and that would be malapropism, right??
are we talking about her mispronunciation or the actual term for the specific manner of her misuse? I didn't know there were such things. So I...
a semicolon would also work. Maia is a semicolon-hater :D
Sounds a lot like the American education system, actually. Good to know we aren't alone in the world :)
You should consider letting your work sit a while before reading it, too. If you're in a position of knowing it so well because you JUST wrote it,...
I didn't know that was the original purpose of a prologue! I think every author i've read recently was doing it wrong, lol :D
It occurs to me that if they're short, you could have one prologue split into two parts, using the "#" on a line by itself technique.
There was no specific reason I changed your sentence in those areas, I just didn't scroll up to read and copy it word for word. It sounds fine...
Separate names with a comma.