Thank you for the sarcasm. But for those of us that occasionally miss something, or something sounds good in our heads but is grammatically...
Word misses half of everything. It doesn't even pick up passive voice. I found something better but it is a subscription based system. Is there...
So...are we skipping over the part where I also specify that the guy is uncircumcised? Is that also part of the fantasy? No, it's just "grittier."...
1) it was just an example of my run on sentences 2) It is not my fantasy. I am only making the world consistent. I want people to go, "ew, gross"...
I think they can make really work if you want something to sound dingy, dirty and post-apocalyptic. examples from my work: 1) A long caravan...
OK, we're down to only one. The other was replaced with "hit by a tranquilizer dart, but is able to push through it till the time lapse between...
Um...no. The black outs are just there to make it look bad for the characters. The second one is more important as a transition from running away...
I just realized that I'm basically ending two chapters the same way, and they are both one after the other. The main character is blacked out and...
Separate names with a comma.