Just rename them to something similar, like SnappyUK said. Readers will still recognise them as Starbucks as long as it's similar, and there'll be...
I think this basically sums up my point of view as well. If you have unnecessary characters, scrap 'em!
I think that could be it. A lot of the ideas that I came up with back in the day were outrageously illogical and would result in just relentless...
I have a huge problem, and I can't seem to shake it. When I was younger, around 9-12, I could come up with plots and ideas for novels easily....
Yep, keep writing. If the publisher/agent asks to see more of your work to see you're not a one-hit-wonder, then you'll want to be able to do that...
Nothing is ever great, looking back on it. But welcome, and I hope you enjoy your stay here
All of the ones you mentioned are legit, and I've heard of them before (Mostly from playing Oblivion, but hey). I think I've seen blood elves...
Welcome! Good to see you finally signed up :)
Basically I just tell myself that there's plenty of time later for editing, to make it better. Don't get caught up with stuff you've already...
Even my advice? I really doubt it, but if you say so... In all honesty, if you can't figure out a good way to start it, maybe try starting...
Going to a Halloween party, but that's about it.
Here's what I'd do: Pick two options, and flip a coin to decide.
I wouldn't put a comma there, but I have seen some people that do. I guess it just depends on what you were taught, really.
Separate names with a comma.
