If several people independent of each other have read your stories and said your dialogue is too wordy, it is. If they say people don't talk like...
Grief can turn into depression or anger or inspiration or manic mindless activity. Your MC could exhibit some of those reactions as the story...
I got paid once about 20 years ago for a script that was to be incorporated into a children's computer app where funny or surprising things...
With respect, TheDarkWriter, what you're describing might be avoidance of the harder work of writing a story. I use my iphone voice memo...
Sorry to hear about your loss. I find your reaction to it interesting - feelings of relief mixed in with loss. It resembles how many people feel...
mammamaia, you beat me to that bit of caution about publishing :) blackstar, I'll read it whether you decide to post it or a very similar story...
iChaotix, I mean this with respect, if you want to be famous really quickly, hire an agent willing to help you with your writing. That person will...
There is an East Asian version of hell that gives me the shudders. You die and awake in a benign but impossibly complex bureaucracy. You have...
You've got time to write a new story, JJ_Maxx. Maybe working on that one will trigger a more satisfying ending to your first one (Maybe...
Welcome blackstar21595. I look forward to your posting of your open-ended ending. They are tricky to pull off satisfactorily. I admit that...
I think its a great premise, Teodor. Cogito is right, too. It's been done so you need to do it your way. The idea was most notably explored in...
Knights of the Argentum Moors Knights of the Silver Loo p?
John Murphy, soldiers are notorious for affixing nicknames to each other. You yourself might be "Murf" and then "Smurf" if you were small in...
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