Thanks for the feedback! I agree with you guys that it would, or could, be a boring start without tension. I posted this pretty late so I didn't...
Hey guys, been quite a long time since I've posted here. Glad to be back now that I've let my writing mature a bit more. Anyways, I wasn't sure...
PS - Final Fantasy VII, Final Fantasy IX, The Legend of Dragoon PS2 - Final Fantasy XII, Shadow Hearts (Covenant), Guitar Hero (all of them),...
I've had an electric guitar for about two years now, and an acoustic for several more and I haven't learned a single chord. Sad. I know. I want to...
I understand where you're coming from. I know I feel that the abusive past is a bit of a cliche, as well. I might go with something deeper, but...
I think it sounds realistic. Revenge is a simple, yet effective, motive. Any long-lived individual would be never just 'forgive and forget', it's...
I'm not much into today's bands with a few exceptions: Disturbed, System of a Down, and Tool... there are others, I'm just too lazy to list them)....
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Thank you all for the great advice and responses! :) I wasn't sure how people would react to this character. I thought about it and I don't...
I have a question regarding one of the antagonists of my story. First, a summarized background/history on the character [this is not set in...
Personally, I dislike first person and try to never read it, and will never write. I'm not fond of experiencing the story through the narrow...
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