Well, the first paragraph is short -- less than 100 words -- not that that justifies it not being good. But, we felt like we had to put something...
Gah. Our first paragraph is terrible. It doesn't go with the rest of the book at all, but because of the way we organized the first two chapters...
But it's not that hard to read. Sure, if I were an agent, I can imagine getting really irritated when reading common grammatical/spelling errors....
We finished the book around the end of December 2010. And, we're starting to see that problem. I've edited the following into the OP. We...
Yes, I know it does! That's what I've been trying to say. It seems like we've got our hopes up over a couple misleading statements and nothing...
Review: We received great reviews from local literary scholars/professors (much better than we ever thought we would have received, at least)....
It depends. It's different for land lines and for cell phones. And, for cell phones, the location of the phone being tracked matters somewhat....
Separate names with a comma.