So I have created a scifi humanoud race with totally black eyes. There is no visible pupil or 'whites', it is just all black. The real reason is...
I have had a scene in my head for a very long time- a naked man charging across a snowy field in the dead of night. With a chopper chasing him. I...
Hey everyone, My name is Chas. I've been writing ever since middle school, which means I'm going on fifteen years now. I have a Bachelor's in...
A lot of times, I write sentences like this: "I saw a flash of uncertainty cross his eyes." This gets confusing when I'm doing it for my half...
Every once and a while I read about a character's eyes being bright or dark but I don't actually know what this means. I interpret dark eyes to...
Simple question: is twice in one chapter too many times to draw attention to a character's eye color? It does further the plot in the way of...
Is it just me, or are some paper books more difficult to read than paper books used to be? I realise I'm getting older and my eyesight isn't...
I remember some years ago when me and my brother was watching a moviec called "Reign of fire, a movie about dragons. The movie itself was crap,...
Among all the other annoying fads out there in the literary world (cough, bloodsuckers, cough, cough), there are a few that are a bit...
How do you react when you're reading a book and the main character is "chosen" to be something or accomplish a great task to save the world? Do...
I wasn't planning on having humans in my fantasy novel. All of the races were going to be unique or have special abilities. The race closest to...
I've read a few posts on here and it came to my attention that I might be over-describing my characters' physical attributes. I don't go insanely...
Choose a character sitting in the circle at a group Therapy session, the story of another character already posted, the story of the man running...
There already are threads about this I think, but something I'm curious about is this. Have you written a story where you started out with one...
am i the only one here who almost can't tell the yellow and red ones apart?... why can't one be so completely different in color, instead of so...
Been a while since I posted a question on here. I just realized something: Suppose I were writing from the perspective of a blind person (let's...
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