**note: updated query letter and first 10 pages in post # 15** I've queried 40 agents since April 3rd. There have been 10 rejections and no request for further material. With the exception of one or two agents, all have requested between 5-10 pages of the MS be attached with the query, about 50% request a synopsis. Is it time to retool my query/synopsis? If anyone wants to look, I have included my query and first 10 pages below. If anyone wants to see my synopsis, just ask and I'll be happy to PM it. I am a little hesitant to post the whole idea of my book on the web at this point.