So I have a few things to ask I. Are four main characters to much? ~I am writing in a 1st person point of view and switching who's perspective I'm in every once in a while to get inside different people's heads. As a reader, would you find that confusing? II. How far is too far? ~I wrote this character, her name is June, and she is the prime example of the "I'm a princess, treat me like one" kind of girl. Is it going too far if I'm having her think thoughts of questions like "Oh, my gosh! How could the teacher tell me I was wrong and embarrass me like that?" if the question fits in with her princess-attitude? III. How to divvy it up? ~When I switch perspectives, how would you switch it. I've tried just putting the name of the character right before the PoV switches, so it looks like: Holly I sat at my desk.... Autumn I picked up my pencil..... (etc.) Is that okay to do? I'm not sure if these are character development, but I wasn't sure.