Recently been plotting a zombie horror story -though I doubt the publishers or agents would kick up a fuss about it- the main character has recently been separated from his partner of three years, for the last two years the partner emasculated the main character called Daniel and he spent most of his time minding his own business at work and working overtime to stay away from her. He used to be a happy, fun loving kind of guy but his future is dull and he just seems to fit into the background. I think that every character should have some 'realism' in them. No main character is dashingly good looking, smart and invincible. Daniel is definitely flawed and definitely vincible. Any comments on this character? Anything wrong with what I've done? Constructive Criticism would be smiled upon.