So since this is general writing I thought I should try: My boyfriend has a website that's about to launch in a few days but, he doesn't want just some simple, mono-toned about me section that will cause no one to read it. He works with high end cars so he wants the best. ( Yes, he's annoying picky sometimes but I deal... I think) I currently have a rough draft that he likes but says it's not perfect yet. Is there anyone here who is a professional with editing these type of drafts or who has worked with car publishing before that can make a few suggestions to make it sound strong and catchy.