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    "About me" section in a website.

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by _Ara_, Feb 20, 2014.

    So since this is general writing I thought I should try:

    My boyfriend has a website that's about to launch in a few days but, he doesn't want just some simple, mono-toned about me section that will cause no one to read it. He works with high end cars so he wants the best. ( Yes, he's annoying picky sometimes but I deal... I think)

    I currently have a rough draft that he likes but says it's not perfect yet. Is there anyone here who is a professional with editing these type of drafts or who has worked with car publishing before that can make a few suggestions to make it sound strong and catchy.
     
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    i'm an editor and writing mentor, would be glad to help you out, ara... send it to me at: maia3maia@hotmail.com and i'll get it right back to you with suggestions for improvement...

    love and hugs, maia
     

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