I haven't written much since yesterday because I've been thinking. I feel like my story is lacking in adventure and depth. What I wanted was a bit of both romance and action. There is a scene I wrote in the beginning about a journey they would go through in order to free someone. Since I'm writing a series, each child would have to find and retrieve their own item. On top of their training and fighting off their fathers minions, I was wondering if this will all be too much for my readers? I was going to add this either way, further into my novel, but if this will happen then I can think of something else to do. Maybe rearrange things around then piece them back together. Or am I just worrying for no real reason?