So I posted Unbreakable, an outline, before and I got quiet a lot of feedback and met by editor (Alex, you're amazing ) So I was wondering what you think of this change? Was a Countess in Australia. She's now Countess of Bishopton in England and she's the daughter Duke and Duchess of Sandonshire. Her mother, Leonora, was given a title by her great-aunt the queen, as a thank you for her service as a mistress of the robes. So here's my question: Does it now make it more believable? Thank you, Laura
