Hi guys, I'm going through what I wrote last night to tighten my prose, and the first thing was to get rid of unnecessary uses of the word 'saw'. I have: Thomas watched as Clair turned away from him. Saw the anguish in her eyes in that moment. It broke his heart. He saw her hurry to the other side of the room. Change to: Thomas watched as Clair turned away from him. The anguish in her eyes broke his heart (good so far). She hurried to the other side of the room (this last sentence to me feels like I've jumped into her head, or am I mistaken?) Thanks!