Hello everyone and thank you for taking the time to read this and give feedback, all of it is appreciated! I have an idea but the whole thing is a mess and it kind of has me in a predicament. I guess that should have been expected after about a year, what with the military running me ragged in that time, so I'm here seeking so aid. The Idea as it currently stands: Aphotic is the synonymy from dark. My MC as it stands is cursed (as usual) except this time it is a little different. His curse has split him into three separate people referred to as the Luminous, the Aphotic and the Equidistant (I know not that awesome but I'm working on the third name any ideas?). The Equidistant is nowhere to be found while the Aphotic and the Luminous are on a distant planet far away from their home world. They have fragmented memories of their full self but not all the memories. When they first meet the Luminous makes it well known he is far from Luminous and tries to kill the Aphotic to absorb him for more power. At this point however they discover that if one dies they both die. So the Luminous proposes that they join together to regain their full memories and power but the Aphotic refuses. He is in love with a young girl who is on the run from an organization trying to gain her 'secret power' and in rage the Luminous begins his furious hunt to destroy the Aphotic effectively sending them on the run from two foes now. I have more so let me know if this isn't enough. What do you guys think?