So I've had this idea swishing around in my head for awhile. And I wanted opinions on how this sounds. "An Orc, adopted at an early age, is raised in a human household. His foster parents name him John, and he is raised as a proper gentleman. John, at the age of sixteen, speaks perfect English, and is very well mannered. However, at age eighteen, the villagers of his hometown raise an angry mob and chase John out of his home. John flees into the wilderness, and comes across a secret Orc war camp. And it just so happens that they were planning an attack on his hometown. John now has the opportunity to attain vengeance." Now this may seem a bit bland, but all I really need is a second opinion to, how should I say, "fine-tune" this idea into something spectacular.