Here's the plot for my current storyline. I love this plot, but I feel that it could use some tweaking, so any suggestions are welcomed! A girl and her family are driving across country to visit some family, and they are driving through the night. She gets tired and falls asleep. She wakes up in the morning to find the car stopped in the middle of nowhere. The doors are open. There's blood everywhere inside the car. No sign of mom or dad, nor little sister. She gets out and follows a blood trail. She comes across the body of her father. The body has been ripped to shreds, but she can identify him from his clothing. Further out, she finds her mother and sister. They've been torn to pieces too. She's freaking out. She goes in search of a road, a passing car, a house, anyone. Where is she? What happened? Why was she spared? Where is everybody? I also want to incorporate a supernatural aspect somewhere into the story. Maybe she was spared because of some undiscovered supernatural ability? What are your thoughts on it?