Angst and Whining

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Killer300, Jun 25, 2011.

  1. Gigi_GNR

    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

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    I hate when authors make teenage characters overly angsty. Yeah, we have hormones, but stop laying it on so thick. None of my friends are ever that woe-is-me.
     
  2. cybrxkhan

    cybrxkhan New Member

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    True... but according to the OED, "Self-Centredness" exists. :p
     
  3. Gigi_GNR

    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

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    Yeah, I've met enough people like that to know that it does. ;)
     
  4. Thanshin

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    That's all right, as long as none of the information you just gave is given in the story.

    That's the point where this thread should be focused:
    Good - The reader is able to describe the character as you just did.
    Bad - The reader is able to point the paragraph where one can read "He turned all his angst inwards, making him bitter and angry instead. He turned his depression into strength. A strength that pushed people away."

    It's quite easy. I'd just put the story in the word processor and run a search for "angst", "depression", "hurt", "angry", "bitter", "sad" and any other I could think off. Then, I'd remove all those fragments and reread the text to see if the reader would still understand the character as I do.
     
  5. Mallory

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    This sums it up far better than I ever could. +rep.
     
  6. Jewbacabra

    Jewbacabra New Member

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    See: Wangst
     

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