Okay here is basically my plot for the First Book of Quar. I would like to see if people think the plot is okay, or if it is too cliche, too predictable, etc. I want constructive criticism, good or bad. Please and thank you. Plot: The Dark Age had ended many years ago, the Dark Lord had not been slain though. Years slowly passed when wind had arrived that the Dark Lord was after a boy with a sword that brought him great interest. It belonged to an elven dragon warrior Elrus, the sword itself was named Aylra mistakenly translated by humans to come out as "blade" thinking that was what he had called his sword and not his dragon. The underlying part in the first book is for the main character to decide whether or not to become the ancient warrior (and to never return to his original state) to save the people of Quar. War has also broken out calling upon the able people to fight the war. The two characters must help as well, fighting on the dragons they had little training with. Serving the Dark Lord is a wizard who sends his army to destroy Emmar in search of the Shards of Quar (which play a bigger role in the sequel) _______ Please bear with me, I have never ever ever shared the "plot" with anyone because I never formally typed out a "plot" i always had it stuck in my mind. So if it does not make sense I apologize because honestly it all makes sense to me since i created it. But I could use ideas to strengthen my story, and what things i should get rid of and what not.