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    Beginning of a Story

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Dirtrackfan3DH, Feb 13, 2016.

    Here's the beginning of my story I'm working on. Would like you guys to critique and give suggestions on anything I could change.

    I could hear the distant roaring from the cars at the local racetrack. My parole officer gave me two options. I could go to prison or I could go work for a raceteam. The racetrack is where everyone loved to be on a Saturday night. I began to think maybe this could be a new beginning for me.
    I had been arrested for running alcohol,and eluding police. I could definitely drive a car, so maybe working for a race team could help me possibly become a racecar driver. DBM racing is a local team that is allowing me to work for them. They have given me my own trailer to live In and pay me to work by the hour. The only is that I must stay at the headquarters living on company property.
     
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    I think you should post this in the workshop (you need to be a member for at least 2 weeks and critique other people's work).
     
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    It says I have insufficient privileges
     
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    Yup, you have to have at least 20 messages posted and 2 critiques.
     
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    Would a critique be a post in the workshop
     
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    You have to critique someone else's work. The rules say you have to write at least two critiques to be able to post in the workshop. And then, the more you read other people's work, the more people will read yours :)
     
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