Here's the beginning of my story I'm working on. Would like you guys to critique and give suggestions on anything I could change. I could hear the distant roaring from the cars at the local racetrack. My parole officer gave me two options. I could go to prison or I could go work for a raceteam. The racetrack is where everyone loved to be on a Saturday night. I began to think maybe this could be a new beginning for me. I had been arrested for running alcohol,and eluding police. I could definitely drive a car, so maybe working for a race team could help me possibly become a racecar driver. DBM racing is a local team that is allowing me to work for them. They have given me my own trailer to live In and pay me to work by the hour. The only is that I must stay at the headquarters living on company property.