1. g_man526

    g_man526 Member

    Joined:
    Aug 29, 2011
    Messages:
    90
    Likes Received:
    5

    Belligerent Sexual Tension!

    Discussion in 'Character Development' started by g_man526, Apr 25, 2013.

    Well, not really belligerent, at least not in my case. I'm not asking help (since I know my characters best and any advice I might follow could be untrue to the characters) so much as asking how other people go about it. If any of you have ever written a couple of characters that starts out seemingly unable to stand the other, how did you reflect that in the writing? Disagreements? Teasing? Causing each other mutual but insignificant wrongs with ensuing over-the-top and disproportionate anger?

    Share it!
     
  2. chicagoliz

    chicagoliz Contributor Contributor

    Joined:
    May 30, 2012
    Messages:
    3,280
    Likes Received:
    817
    Location:
    Pennsylvania
    It would really be the same way you'd show any two characters who don't like each other or have complicated feelings for each other interacting. You could show actions and thoughts that are at odds with what the character has actually said.
     
  3. Garball

    Garball Banned Contributor

    Joined:
    Apr 24, 2013
    Messages:
    2,827
    Likes Received:
    1,337
    Location:
    S'port, LA
    Drinking, arguing
     
  4. TerraIncognita

    TerraIncognita Aggressively Nice Person Contributor

    Joined:
    May 28, 2010
    Messages:
    1,332
    Likes Received:
    39
    Location:
    Texas
    I believe you answered your own question. :p
     
  5. KaTrian

    KaTrian A foolish little beast. Contributor

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2013
    Messages:
    6,764
    Likes Received:
    5,393
    Location:
    Funland
    Haven't written anything like this because if a man is attracted to a woman, it's unlikely he'll be a jerk towards her, or if he is, he must be an all-round jerk (like Sterling Archer in the Archer animation series). Men pretty much just want to get laid, and a bitchy man won't. Women can get laid even if they're bitchy.
     
  6. jannert

    jannert Retired Mod Supporter Contributor

    Joined:
    Mar 7, 2013
    Messages:
    17,674
    Likes Received:
    19,891
    Location:
    Scotland
    Sexual tension exists when the two people in question are totally focused on each other. It doesn't really matter if they annoy or anger each other, as long as they completely engage the other person's attention. Other people in the picture just aren't important. That's the giveaway. Focus. If one is able to ignore or forget the other (by ignore, I mean really ignore, not just pretend to ignore!) then there probably isn't any sexual tension in the relationship.
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice