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    Can you help?

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Sirwilfrid, Jul 14, 2010.

    Hi guy!I'm doing an essay on a Photograph that was given to me based to an earthquake that happened in Haiti. I have a problem reinstate my thesis in the conclusion,what I mean is i don't know how to do it.

    here's my thesis "
     
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    That doesn't look like a thesis. It looks like an event, or sequence of events. The thesis should be the central point your essay is trying to make. From what you described, it looks like your thesis might be something like: "Love can emerge from tragedy."

    Does that help?
     
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    is this for a school class assignment?... if so, it's against the site rules to help with homework...
     
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    Thanks for your response! I manage to make it work. It's a descriptive essay of a photograph I was doing,and i was stuck at the end for a conclusion, didn't know how to end it.
     

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