Character Workshop

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Raven, Apr 18, 2007.

  1. Kratos

    Kratos New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male

    Choose a place of birth.
    Kalon, Tallus

    Choose a hobby.
    Reading, training.

    Choose a past job.
    He's been a squire for most of his life, but he was a page when he was younger.

    Choose a present job.
    A squire for his older brother.

    Choose a past love interest.
    He's never had a love interest, or, no one that liked him back.

    Choose an enemy.
    A mysterious man cloaking in shadow who kills by dissolving his victim's bodies with acid.

    Choose a pet.
    No pet -- although he has a Spirit that follows him around.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    After page's become of age, they become squires.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    I already said; no love interest.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    He's thought about it, but right now he needs to be with his brother.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    Well, the guy started killing people, and that's not a good thing in Jayson's eyes.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    His spirit has temporarily possessed his body, allowing him to get out of tough situations.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    Dying, I guess.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    His mother back. But so far he hasn't found a way.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Jayson Slade. 15, and average height and weight with semi-long brown hair and green eyes.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    His father killed his mother, so Jayson hates him with a passion. He's best friends with his brother, and wants to be a knight like him.
     
  2. mammamaia

    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    since this is a sticky, don't you think the thread title's misspelling should be corrected?... ['charactor' vs. 'character']... feel free to delete this post afterwards, since it's not relevant to the thread content...

    hugs, m
     
  3. Banzai

    Banzai One-time Mod, but on the road to recovery Contributor

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    I'm leaving it, because it's been bugging me for a while- I'm just too lazy to do anything. But since it's bugging others too...

    *click*
     
  4. Mousie

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    Whoa, I didn't notice that! :eek:
     
  5. Crazy Ivan

    Crazy Ivan New Member

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    The dumpster behind your McDonalds.
    Choose a gender.
    Male

    Choose a place of birth.
    Burnsville, Minnesota, USA.

    Choose a hobby.
    Woodworking, archery

    Choose a past job.
    Assistant to the director of the Apple Valley branch of Apocalyptics Anonymous.

    Choose a present job.
    Head director of the Apple Valley branch of Apocalyptics Anonymous.

    Choose a past love interest.
    Suzie Qu, a pretty Chinese Recruiter at his local branch.

    Choose an enemy.
    Sandra, his rival for power at AA who is selling out the organization's...unique capabilities to a company, despite the fact that it will basically bring about the end of the world.

    Choose a pet.
    None. Pets are hard to get into the headquarters, seeing as it's right over the county library.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    He got promoted when the former Head Director went to college.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    His love was unrequited, as evidenced when Suzie started going out with fellow Recruiter Tim Wood.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    Woodworking is not essential to keeping the fate of the world in check. Archery is essential occasionally, but usually his job is just to give directions and stuff.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    Sandra has a past of engaging Johnny in power struggles for control over the group, which has recently escalated with her shady activities, although Johnny doesn't know it...yet.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    N/A. (I feel like I should have a wittier answer to that.)

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    He wants to avert the end of the world. Because, you know, it just seems like the sensible thing to do. Up until now, he's done his job- along with many other Head Directors of AA branches- by ensuring timelines in his area are acted out as they should be. Recently the deadline of the apocalypse has been moved way up (specifically, ten days from now) and Johnny has already fallen in with the one person who can help him (the novel's main character) and started researching his options.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    A happy, normal life. This might sound like an awful no-brainer, but seeing as he's an orphan who has grown up in and taken power over a supernatural, supersecret teenage organization, it's very often difficult to balance things.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Jonathan, but he likes- insists on- being called Johnny. (He was abandoned shortly after birth, and the AA members who 'adopted' him only gave him a first name.) He's 14, and tall, thin, with relatively good looks- the kind of kid who could become a TV show host one day. He has scruffy brown hair and green eyes, and normally wears either a brown monkish cloak or a sports jersey and jeans.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    A snarky, occasionally cynical, attitude. He was abandoned shortly after birth, but luckily a vision of him was seen in one of the AA's echo chambers, so he was picked up by the AA, becoming one of their many foundling members. He grew up, learned, worked, and ascended the ranks there. Now he's a teenager with a sarcastic outlook on everything. He constantly derides the same world he's currently trying to save.
     
  6. Iulia

    Iulia New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    female

    Choose a place of birth.
    Arnington

    Choose a hobby.
    writing

    Choose a past job.
    She's never had a job

    Choose a present job.
    nor does she now

    Choose a past love interest.
    George :)

    Choose an enemy.
    None at the beginning, but in various places her sister (not exactly an enemy per-say, but she gets pretty mad), Swain, etc.

    Choose a pet.
    N/A

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    Because it didn't exist.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    Because he's like six years older than her (big difference when you're fourteen) and lives pretty far away.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    Because it doesn't bring home the bacon.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    Rumors . . .

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    N/A

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    Being like her father, because he was basically scum. She tries really hard, but has flaws and tries in various ways to be more like her half-sister.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    Honor. Because she's never had it, but been close enough to taste it.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Kyran - 14 - curly curly curly red hair, average blue-green eyes. Average build, freckles.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    She's not perfect, in a nutshell, and her sister seemingly is. She narrates my story in first person and doesn't think highly of herself. Tells it like it is. Etc.
     
  7. Mousie

    Mousie New Member

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    Phoenix, Arizona
    Choose a gender.
    male

    Choose a place of birth.
    San Diego, California

    Choose a hobby.
    riding buses

    Choose a past job.
    online RPGer (not exactly a "job", but...)

    Choose a present job.
    custodian (lulz)

    Choose a past love interest.
    none

    Choose an enemy.
    That freaking Aiden kid

    Choose a pet.
    a big, black mutt named Lumpy

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    'cause his dad's got him custodianing at his office all the time, so he's never got enough time to get on the internets.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    'cause they never existed :/

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    He doesn't wanna drive buses, he just likes riding them. Not much of a future in that.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    The freaking Aiden kid's a homophobe. In 7th grade, Mr. Main Character Guy pointed out that there was nothing wrong with being gay, and was immediately labeled as a phaggot and that freaking Aiden kid's been a douchebag to him ever since.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    ._.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    He wants to avoid being a boring person, because it's boring as hell and he doesn't want to "disappear", as Blanche puts it. He's constantly doing things he wouldn't normally do, breaking out of his comfort zone and all that, so he isn't bored as hell. He rides buses around and gets off at random stops, and he'll probably be doing that until he goes off to college (or when the local bus starts charging money - whichever comes first)

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it?
    More than anything, he wants to do something. Not necessarily something epic and life-changing, but something that'll keep him from "disappearing". By constantly breaking out of his comfort zone, I guess he's already doing it.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    His name is Eriol Bevans, 15 years old. He's a tall, scrawny, asian (technically half-asian, but whatever) guy with dark, floofy hair and random birthmarks all over him, kinda like freckles. He seems a little on the girlie side, with a really feminine face and a soft voice. Doesn't really help that he's afraid of bugs and snakes, but whatever. His clothes are usually a few sizes too big, and he wears a lot of jeans and long-sleeved shirts, even when it's, like, 100 degrees outside.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    Um...I know Eriol's a freshman in highschool. And his father is English and German and a buncha other stuff, and his mother is Asian, and looks a lot like him (which is kinda weird if you think about it). His father owns a small fire-alarm business, and Eriol works in the office after school as a "custodian". His mother works at Ikea, and his big sister, Jo, is in her second year of college. Eriol's always been really quiet and timid and, well, boring. He didn't have any close friends, and one day, it just kinda hit him: he was sick of being bored all the time. So, he started doing all this stuff he wouldn't normally do - striking up conversations with random people at school, sitting by strangers in practically-empty movie theaters, walking into office buildings just to see what it looks like on the inside, that kinda thing. That's when he befriended Blanche, a shy, nervous girl who cries a lot and is afraid of "disappearing" - being forgotten by everybody - and no, they do not fall in love :p He's also got his big, strong doggie named Lumpy, who his mom adopted from the pound. Eriol thinks Lumpy might be mentally retarded, but he's not an expert on doggie psychology, so he could be wrong. He doesn't think he is, though.
     
  8. Ramblling

    Ramblling New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male
    Choose a place of birth.
    Tar-Lec in that world over there...literally...
    Choose a hobby.
    Following order's from Mutt and supressing her into finally telling why she cant speak Relic's name... and having incrediably hearing then being able to merely think that person dead (Takes concentraton and some other rules of supernatural abilites)
    Choose a past job.
    Theifing rogue in Mutt's army.
    Choose a present job.
    In Mutt's personal party, destroying towns and reporting to Relic.
    Choose a past love interest.
    None.

    Choose an enemy.
    Sen the forester.

    Choose a pet.
    N/A
    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    Was apart of Mutt's army so is to go were every Mutt says.
    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    None

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    he Does
    How did your character make the enemy?
    killing and all...why else...he-he
    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    none

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid?
    betraying his team

    What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    Id say not betraying them...



    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical descriptionName is Jagis and he's twenty something (He dosnet know his own age) has black hair and a white streak like a skunk from a deep blow he'd taken by Mutt. A scar on his hair line (Thick and deep one, its more like a chunk missing than a slash, not a hole though) which is why his hair turned white. Green eyes (Discribed as 'mouldy')
     
  9. Ramblling

    Ramblling New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Female


    Choose a place of birth.

    Tar-Lec city...over there...

    Choose a hobby.
    Leader of an the rogue army from another world, and bargain maker with Relic.

    Choose a past job.
    Leader of all Rogue's in their past world, you nkow, until it was envadored...and more or less destroyed...*cough*

    Choose a present job.
    Only person who can speak freely to Relic and leader of one of the attacking rogue parties.

    Choose a past love interest.
    none

    Choose an enemy.
    Relic

    Choose a pet.
    none

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    because if youre world's envaded by a bunch of hippies (Not literally, all i can think of) do you think youll stick around? (I would, but there not hippies persay...hippies with guns...grenades...more like rocket launchers driven by hippies getting high in army tanks)

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    none

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    it is

    How did your character make the enemy?making a bargain with him, and on oast ocassion with close relatives of sorts.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    N/A

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Confronting Relic unarmed Why? vunrable

    What has he already done to avoid this?
    nothing much

    What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    I'd say its pretty unaviodable...so dieing might be a good option...


    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have?


    IDK yet

    Why?

    *cough*

    What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    ...what...

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description

    Mutt and is about 29-31. Has black and grey hair, resembels a wolf because of supernatural traits. Has black claws instead of nails, red veined webbed eyes (Brown as a wolfs though) No extra hair (not Like the gay crap on Harry potter or those hunchback retard werewolf buggers) Qualits of a wolf, fangs and snarls/sounds/howls, can last like a wolf with a long time without water and food. will eat raw flesh. Sight though is exseptionally poor, hearing is thrice the times of a wolf.
     
  10. Trave_xx

    Trave_xx New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male
    Choose a place of birth.
    Pembrokes
    Choose a hobby.
    Glenn likes to just have a good time.
    Choose a past job.
    He is too young to get a job.
    Choose a present job.
    Unemployed.
    Choose a past love interest.
    He used to like this girl name Mary. She had beautiful blond hair, blue eyes … the whole shebang. This, of course, was puppy love. No substance came out of this relationship. What Glenn admired about her was her reserved attitude, as he could easily relate to her and feed from her energy.
    Choose an enemy.
    Glenn’s enemy is _ _. He met him in the plane ride, as the stewardesses needed help placing his wheelchair into the plane. Yes, _ is handicapped; we are never quite told what he has. Glenn felt sorry for him, but _ turned out to be wise, yet very stubborn. Even though he is handicapped and in a wheelchair, he is mentally well. No adult believes he is mean spirited, because he plays his cards very well. Glenn’s future enemy is D’Muert, the actual villain of the novel.
    Choose a pet.
    After joining House 1227, Glenn and the others get a pet Shebal, a small horse-like animal. He is named Whisper. A very magical creature, Shebals develop all the traits of the people that it has been with for long periods of time. One can say Whisper has multiple personalities because of this.
    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    n/a
    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    He never was.
    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    He’s a kid.
    How did your character make the enemy?
    Look up.
    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    What? o_O
     
  11. Trollhammaren

    Trollhammaren New Member

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    Marco Hietala's laundry basket
    Choose a gender.

    Male

    Choose a place of birth.

    Eregnir

    Choose a hobby.

    Trying in vain to make his life run as smoothly as possible, shouting at people, and being an arse.

    Choose a past job.

    This is the only job he's ever had! Apart from working on the black market, of course... but he doesn't like to reveal that.

    Choose a present job.

    He's the barman and manager of The Hangman Inn. Such a pleasant name.

    Choose a past love interest.

    That's a secret.

    Choose an enemy.

    He doesn't like many people. ;)

    Choose a pet.

    He has enough work looking after the inn!

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    He sort of got... in deep, deep trouble. Thankfully, his bacon was saved by an old friend.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    Fine. His love interest was the Lord of Laiahond, Baldur. So naturally, they moved apart.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    His hobby (shouting at people) IS his profession. He couldn't get by without it.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    Very easily.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    Not available. Unless this pet we're talking about is Tarmo, although you couldn't really call him a pet...

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why?

    Unnecessary conflits- just because of that fact that they're unnecessary.

    What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He can't really avoid it, it comes to him. That's what you get for messing with wizards, after all.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    I suppose secretly he'd like to see Baldur again, and generally have a little more luxury than he has now because of it. Why? Because he likes it! He's done, and he'll do, anything to obtain anything. Dwarves are bloody ruthless.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Val; he prefers not to say; stocky, bald and tattooed. Usually sweating.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    Go away.
     
  12. Firefly

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    Choose a gender.

    Male

    Choose a place of birth.

    Omaha, NE

    Choose a hobby.

    Exploring

    Choose a past job.

    Zoo animal (I guess that would be a job)

    Choose a present job.

    Leader of his pack

    Choose a past love interest.

    Laura (current)

    Choose an enemy.

    Dakota

    Choose a pet.

    N/A

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    He didn't have enough freedom.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    N/A

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    Straying too far from the places he already knows could endanger him and his pack.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    Dakota, a grumpy cougar, along with her pride, has tried numerous times to make a meal out of Jack and his pack.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    N/A

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He avoids getting captured, both by humans or big, hungry animals. He has been lying low with his pack, trying not to give away their location. In the future, he hopes to uncover the location of the mysterious Aurinko Island where he hopes they can live in peace.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    To live in peace on Aurinko Island. He is sure he will not be bothered there,since, as far as he knows, nobody has lived there for a long, long time. So far, he has done nothing to get there, except wait for a time he can sneak over there with his pack.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Name: Jack; Age: 4 (in our real-time years, though an adult in his years); Appearance: Quite lean and lanky, as if he never ate, but truly he is in great shape. He has medium-length fur, huge ears, a curious, soft face, though jaws lined with deadly, sharp teeth. His fur is marbled with black, tan and white, with a bushy, white-tipped tail, huge black ears and bold, brown eyes. He always wears a green backpack and carries a large, sharpened stick with him used for hunting and defending his pack.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    He is an anthropomorphic African wild dog. He can walk like a dog on four legs, but also like a human on two legs and do "human things" (like writing, reading, etc). At a young age, he was stolen from the zoo where he was born and kept by a dog collector. He escaped after a long while, and, after a series of events, joined up with other feral animals and formed a pack.
     
  13. Amor

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    Choose a gender.

    Female

    Choose a place of birth.

    Manhattan, NYC, New York

    Choose a hobby.

    Drawing pictures of the city

    Choose a past job.

    Too young for an actual job

    Choose a present job.

    Student, I guess (at Felix High School)

    Choose a past love interest.

    None

    Choose an enemy.

    Another character named James, before she falls in love with them.

    Choose a pet.

    She lives in an apartment. No pets.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    Too young

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    There was no love interest

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    She doesn't think that she can make it as an artist in the 'real world'...plus, she's too young to be a paid professional

    How did your character make the enemy?

    James was too annoying.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    N/A - no pet

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    The character, Celeste, wants to avoid death, because later on in the story she finds out that she is destined to die soon. James has saved her life (he's her Guardian Angel and he doesn't want her to die), so that's how it's avoided temporarily. And...well, James just continues to save her, so yeah.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    Celeste wants to be with James (and vice versa, even though James isn't human) and not be stuck with the fact that fate has other plans for her. She and James try to keep her alive.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Her name is Celeste Pearce, but her mom, James, and her brother Kyle, call her Cel. She's 15 years old. She has wavy red hair and piercing grey eyes. Other features, such as her muscular build and extremely arched eyebrows, give her a "tough look".

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    Overall, Celeste just has a terrible life; her mom doesn't really care about her, her father had killed himself a year before the story begins, she's never had any true friends, and much more. She is always defensive because that's the way that she was forced to live. She had to be tough, no questions asked. And then she met James, who is actually her Guardian Angel and is not happy with her fate: to die very soon. Celeste fell in love with James, and he helps her become less defensive, as well as comforting her with the terrible things that had happened to her in the past.
     
  14. Firefly

    Firefly Member

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    Location:
    Nebraska
    Choose a gender.

    Male

    Choose a place of birth.

    Tuscon, Arizona

    Choose a hobby.

    Working with technology (like computers and radios)

    Choose a past job.

    Computer repairman (in a big software company)

    Choose a present job.

    Biologist (and Sunday School teacher on Sunday)

    Choose a past love interest.

    None

    Choose an enemy.

    Christopher Vincent

    Choose a pet.

    Hero (a coyote he rescued)

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    He was wrongly accused of hacking and was fired.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    There never was one.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    He worked with computers until he was fired.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    His enemy, Christopher Vincent, hacked into the company's database, stole important information and created and circulated a virus from Daniel's computer. He framed Daniel, which was quite easy. Daniel was accused, sent to jail, though soon after was found to be innocent. They have been enemies ever since this incident. Nobody knows that Christopher was the culprit, as Daniel fears he'll be killed if he tells anybody.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    Daniel was once poisoned by Christopher (after Daniel confronted him about his crimes and threatened to get the FBI involved) and lured out to the forest where it was thought that nobody would save him (but Hero followed of course). He would appear dead to any human. Hero, however, with his superior senses, knew his owner was alive. He didn't risk leaving Daniel. That was too risky, especially at twilight when both dangerous animals and dangerous people are more active. He stayed there and guarded the man until two strangers passed through the forest and were called by Hero. They never would have noticed him if it weren't for Hero's howling. Daniel was saved.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He would hate to see Hero die, as Hero is the only earthly being he feels he can trust. He has been doing anything he can to protect his pet.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    He would love for every race, every religion, everybody, to set aside their differences and come together as one world. He knows the world won't last forever and believes that we should spend our time on earth doing what God made us to: love one another, love God, and be loved by God. He has been teaching children every Sunday at Sunday School, as when you are younger, the things you learn have a bigger effect on you.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Daniel Ambrose // 27 // Quite tall and lean, appearing to be in good shape, but with barely any muscle on him. His hair is dark brown and his eyes are a pale gray-blue color. He dresses very informally: Jeans and a plain T-shirt every day. Very rarely will he wear a polo shirt. He would be caught dead in a suit. At work, though, he wears a lab coat.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    He's somewhat reserved, tending to avoid large groups of people. His best friend is his coyote, Hero, whom he saved and raised from puppyhood.
    He grew up in a very Christian home, his father being the pastor of a local church. He reads the Bible every day he can and kneels to pray at night. He is so devout, in fact, that he says he would die for God if he had to.
     
  15. Gouloon

    Gouloon New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male

    Choose a place of birth.
    Los Angeles

    Choose a hobby.
    Petty theft, Robotics

    Choose a past job.
    Thief

    Choose a present job.
    Tinkerer

    Choose a past love interest.


    Choose an enemy.
    The police

    Choose a pet.
    A robotic Dragon-creature


    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    Because, he was turned on to a brighter path.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?


    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    Because he doesn't believe it is important enough; Wants to be more important than just another guy.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    By being a thief

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    It transforms into a motorcycle, it always gets him out of tight spots.


    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He avoids being confined, he lives in a junkyard to avoid being confined by social norms. In the distant future, given having enough power, he'd build a very large house and seclude himself in it.


    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    He wants to be rich, he believes he can do this by hawking cheap mods to cyborgs or stealing old crap from museums. He hopes to find a way to explore the universe some day.


    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Cosmo Armstrong
    14
    An average teen. He wears a fishing hat and has an "urban" hairstyle. He wears a Tshirt with a cartoon character on it, and shorts.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    Cosmo is an orphan, both of his parents police officers who were killed in the anti-robot riots. As an orphan, he quickly learned that to survive, you can't always be honest, and took to thievery. As a personal rule, he never steals money, just objects. To augment his abilities, he uses robotic modifications.
     
  16. photophreak

    photophreak New Member

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    Choose a gender.

    Female

    Choose a place of birth.

    Suburb of Boston (need to narrow that down)

    Choose a hobby.

    Photography

    Choose a past job.

    None. Her parents were well off. She never needed to get a job as a kid. She went right to college out of high school and began her career after graduating.

    Choose a present job.

    Photographer

    Choose a past love interest.

    She only has two

    The Surfer (Yeah, he probably needs a name) Very freestyle and good looking, tanned, strong, fun. This was not a relationship of substance though. More a relationship of freestyle fun.

    The Corporate Guy (who also needs a name, and a more defined job) This was a "real" relationship. They were engaged. Shortly before the story begins, they will have broken up, because she sees that she is losing herself by staying with him. He plans for her to be his stay at home wife, mom of children and homemaker. She wants to continue her career and her slightly more freestyle life.

    Choose an enemy.

    Her dad's next door neighbor. They went to school together, and he was mean to her. She hates him, and uses him as a sort of scapegoat for her anger at how she was treated in school.

    Choose a pet.

    No pets. She doesn't want to be tied down by one.

    Her dad has a Shi Tsu(sp?), though, and she will be going to stay with him for a prolonged period. Her mom raised Shi Tsus and trained them prior to her death. "Fritzi" is the last of her mom's dogs, and is very elderly.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    N/A

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    Explained in the question above

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    She does. How lucky is she?

    How did your character make the enemy?

    Kind of explained above. He isn't aware that they are enemies. He doesn't even remember her. She wasn't a blip on his radar during the time in which she holds him accountible for.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    It didn't, actually. :p

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    My character had a rough adolescence. She was moved to a new place when her father retired. She never fit in at her new school. She was picked on for her lack of athletic skill at a school where athletics were a big focus.

    As an adult, she is afraid of returning to that outcast place. She has formed strong friendships, although not an exorbitant number of them. She has perfected her skill at photography to the point that she is a sought after photographer where she lives. She is able to charge a lot for her services, and does not have to work any more than she wants to. Her limited sessions add to her sought after status.


    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    My character hopes for true love and a sense of inner peace. She is still troubled by her childhood. She has demons to face and to overcome before she will be able to achieve that inner peace.

    She has tried on relationships (Surfer Boy and Corporate Man) to try and achieve true love.

    She is not actively trying to achieve true love and inner peace. I think it will just come through a series of events.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Mary Katherine, known as Kat to her friends and family. She is around 28-31. Haven't nailed that down yet. She is a very slim woman. Tall. 5'9 or so. Long dirty blond hair that is heavily sun streaked from her years of living in Florida. Her hair is about halfway between curly and straight, maybe a tad more toward the curly side. Kind of unruly, which she just goes with. She is not overly concerned with her looks, but is pretty in a natural way. Not a model, not an ogre.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    She is torn between staying with her father where she lived from age 12 until she went to college and staying in Florida, where she has built her life and her career. Her father needs her, as his health is failing, and he has begun to suffer the effects of Alzheimer's. Her significantly older siblings have pinned the duty of caring for him upon her, because they feel she can easily leave her work(she is self employed, and does not work every day, or even every week), and they have family (children) and work that they "can not" leave.

    I plan on a slow shift from Kat longing to be back in Florida and away from the place that has such bad memories for her, to Kat facing her past and coming to terms with it and recognizing the beauty in the place where she grew up, so that when she is back in Florida, she longs for her childhood home in much the same way that she longed for Florida when she first went home. Ultimately she will return there and realize her hope for inner peace and true love.
    __________________________________________________________

    I have this whole story curled up like a little fiddlehead fern in my brain, but i'm just scared that it will come out cliched and ridiculous. Someone kick me in the a$$. :D

    It's probably pretty evident that Kat and the next door neighbor are going to hook up. otherwise, why would he even be there? I don't want it to be cliche though. I want to really develop his character so that it is not a cliched girl hates boy, turns into love hate relationship, then turns into true love, why didn't she see it all along type thing.

    It's big for me that I'm about to hit submit reply. eek.
     
  17. fantasywriter

    fantasywriter New Member

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    Location:
    Oklahoma
    Choose a gender.

    Male

    Choose a place of birth.

    The small village of Khuur

    Choose a hobby.

    Magic

    Choose a past job.

    None

    Choose a present job.

    Freelance Adventurer

    Choose a past love interest.

    Prefers not to disclose. :-D

    Choose an enemy.

    Calvus Asa

    Choose a pet.

    None

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    ?

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    It's a secret!

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    Uh . . . It sort of is a profession.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    They travel together, actually, and aren't necessarily enemies, but he grows tired of Calvus' pride and boastful behavior, and secretly dislikes him for it.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    There never was a pet.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He would hate to die. He has already faced death once, and it was awful; not necessarily something he would want to go through again. Previously, he was near death, but was healed. In the future, he will do anything to prevent it from happening again.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    Power. He feels that he is not powerful enough, and will strive to become the most powerful wizard in the world, even if it means making a sacrifice to obtain it.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    Arcis Tanton // 21 // About 6 feet tall, with hansome features; dark brown, curly hair, bright blue eyes, and a lean, slightly muscular body. He wears brown robes, and carries a sword at his hip.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    - a wizard
    - somewhat arrogant, but intelligent
    - best friend is Vashon Legend
    - in love with Lahna Asher
    - kind an optimistic at times, but can also be harsh and selfish
    - adventurous
     
  18. rumplestiltzkin

    rumplestiltzkin New Member

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    Okay, so here's one of my favorite characters

    Choose a gender.

    female

    Choose a place of birth.

    continent of Zhu'akla, in a thief camp (by the river)

    Choose a hobby.

    jumping out at people from behind bushes and freaking the crap out of them

    Choose a past job.

    a theif in her family; they all had little groups of five and would go out to steal stuff

    Choose a present job.

    theif clan leader; there are two other people in it, and the rest of them were killed by some dude that's an evil SOB

    Choose a past love interest.

    None

    Choose an enemy.

    Her sister, Leah, who has tried to kill and cause pain to her and her friends. She hadn't seen her sister since she left the continent of Zhu'akla, when she was 14, but her sister came to retrieve her two years later, to bring her back to her old job

    Choose a pet.

    None

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    She didn't like it much and a lot of the people there were killed in an attack; also, her aunt and uncle exiled her momentairily after she attacked her aunt, hoping she could avenge her mother's death (she couldn't.)

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    does not apply

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    because making it a profession sounds like work, and she doesn't want to ruin it like that

    How did your character make the enemy?

    her enemy has just hated her and everyone else all her life, but only now is she really fighting back, which just pisses the enemy off more

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    does not apply

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    she wants to protect her best friend Lilac, and doesnt want to drag her into any of her own affairs; she feels the same way about the rest of her friends right now. she ran away from her friends with Leah, her sister, in order to "protect" them, not realizing that they would follow her. not much she can do about that.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    she wants people to trust her like the people in her thief clan do, but isnt quite sure how to go about it. she didnt realize that it would happen organically, over a period in time.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    her name is bronte, she's sixteen, has soft brown eyes, and is sort of short. she wears a dagger at her hip, and has a brown vest and white cotton shirt, snug fitting pants, and leather boots.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    she's really cheerful and random, and makes up words all the time, her usual greeting when someone asks who she is is "i am bronte montigo, leader of the single most awesomest thief clan there is!" she jokes around a lot, and isnt exactly smart, making her an easy target for some of the other party members, who constantly insult her. and she's terrified of anchovies. (for good reason, too, i say!)


    ...whew.
     
  19. Asuran

    Asuran New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male.

    Choose a place of birth.
    The capital of his home country, Kerthil.

    Choose a hobby.
    Mapmaking.

    Choose a past job.
    Guard

    Choose a present job.
    Ship Captain

    Choose a past love interest.
    Mari Kwand, the daughter of the highest government official

    Choose an enemy.
    His younger brother

    Choose a pet.
    N/A

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    He was hunted down by his government.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    He was being hunted by his government and had to flee, leaving her behind.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    He eventually does.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    N/A

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    He would avoid meeting with any government official from his island country because he knows the penalty for the crimes he has commited: death. He fled his country and found a new land to the far east which he settled.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    He would attain the love of his past love intrest, Mari, because, to him, she means the world. He has broken countless laws to see her. He hopes to one day return to his country to find her.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Logall Dendar. He is a twenty-one year old man with shortcut brown hair and green eyes. He is slightly tanned and has a muscular build from working on a ship for six months. At five feet ten inches, he is the shortest person in his family.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    Logall has four wives, one of whom he has two children with. His oldest child, a girl named Sun, was born on the ship that carried Logall and his family eastward and gave the name to the new land Logall discovers. Logall maps the entire northwest of the new land. After settling, he takes his wives, child, and twenty servants and leaves for mountains is the northern part of his new home, separating from his brother and his brother's wives and servants. He is killed by his nephew while planning a voyage back to his home land to see his love. He kills his nephew. He lives until the age of 76.
     
  20. writetolive213

    writetolive213 New Member

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    Choose a gender.
    Male

    Choose a place of birth.
    Autumn Valley,USA

    Choose a hobby.
    Music

    Choose a past job.
    pizza parlour

    Choose a present job.
    singer/songwriter

    Choose a past love interest.
    Grey Pierson

    Choose an enemy.
    Everly Lorne

    Choose a pet.
    Rufus-Golden Retriever

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    He became a singer/songwriter

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    She left him for the guy she had an affair with.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    It is his profession.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    He was the guy the girl left with. They were once best friends.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    It was a companion when he was lonely, someone to talk to.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid?
    Disappointing or hurting the ones he loves, especially Grey (ex-gf), Skye (wife), Ryder (son with Grey) his friends, and other kids.

    Why?
    It would hurt him too bad to see them hurt.

    What has he already done to avoid this?
    Stopped doing heroin. Stopped being self destructive.Worked hard.

    What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    Same.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have?
    Grey.

    Why?
    He loves her.

    What has he already done to try to obtain it?
    Nothing, she's happy with Everly.

    What does he hope to try in the future?
    Nothing, he's happy with Skye

    What is your character's name?
    Nicolai (Nick) November Law

    What is your character's age, and physical description.
    18-28. He's tall 6'4 or so, lanky, with black hair, various lengths, longish, falls into his eyes, short around the sides, and green eyes.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    His mom died of breast cancer when he was twelve, his dad was shot in the line of duty when he was eightteen. He became a professional singer/songwriter at 18, was famous by 19, household name by 20, rich and succesful by 19. He has one older brother, Frank. Growing up he hung out with; Frank, Andrew Pierson, Bobby Tucker, Michael Pierson, Grey Pierson, Ray Lonelly, and Everly Lorne. Him and Grey became a couple when they were nineteen, they had a son when they were twenty: Ryder November Law. When Everly returned from the Marines, Grey and him started a relationship, Grey left Nick for Everly. Nick devastated took Ryder to raise him, Nick started doing heroin again, and introduced Michael to it. Nick quit when he met Skye, they married. Michael overdosed on heroin, and Andrew and Grey never forgave Nick. Nick started raising Michael's kids as his own. Nick and Skye married and had a daughter.Nick almost accidentally overdoses on pills (he started suffering from insomnia when his mom died, it got steadily worse with each tragedy, till it was awful when Michael died) almost dies, and realizes that the life he has lived was the best he could do. DOn't know if he dies or not.
     
  21. Lulu

    Lulu New Member

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    I'm doing this for an established character. She is the protagonist (anti-hero, mostly) of one of my stories.

    Choose a gender.
    Female

    Choose a place of birth.
    Arizona

    Choose a hobby.
    Planning the apocalypse, planning a mass-genocide, botany, beading

    Choose a past job.
    N/A

    Choose a present job.
    Student

    Choose a past love interest.
    N/A

    Choose an enemy.
    Isaac Malus. He wants revenge as he believes her family is responsible for his cousin's death.

    Choose a pet.
    She has no pet.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    She has never been employed.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    She has never been in love.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    It is her top priority to do so.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    One year prior, her brother needed a heart transplant while Isaac's terminally ill cousin needed one too. Her father was a well respected surgeon at the hospital, and influenced the heart to be given to her brother. Also, she recieved a terrible Machine that gives her the power of total control over the world...once it's activated. Isaac wants this power and believes that if the world fell to her, it would surely be destroyed.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    N/A

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    She would avoid corruption. She wants a perfect humankind. The most ideal situation is that nobody but herself is corrupt and sinful. What will she do to prevent this? Kill the corrupted.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    She wants an ideal, beautiful Utopian Society. She wants the scum of society, the sinful, the useless to be cleansed from the Earth. To do so, she is perfectly happy to resort to mass-worldwide-genocide.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Her name is Aurora St. James. She is twelve years old, with wavy, dirty blonde hair. She looks very ordinary, run-of-the-mill with the exception of her violet eyes. Aurora, or 'Auri' as she is known as, is 5' 2'', 95lbs. In public, she has on a fake smile that belies her malevolent interior. When not smiling, she is scowling or grimacing, or grinning like a jack-o-lantern.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    Auri has a Machine made by the other-wordly beings called Levitates that allows her to mold the world as she wishes. She has the mind of a totaliterian dictator and a seventh grade girl. She wants everyone to be equal to one another--Auri greatly respects Stalin, Lenin, and Mao. Auri is followed around by two angels with whom she shares her plans of world domination.

    Aurora St. James is very egotistical, evil, etc...but she hides it under the mask of utter ordinariness.

    She has a God-complex.
     
  22. CinnriStreusel

    CinnriStreusel New Member

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    ~This is going to be the character himself talking~

    Choose a gender.
    ...I'm a guy

    Choose a place of birth.
    I was born in the New York Presbyterian Hospital.

    Choose a hobby.
    People say that I have an unhealthy addiction to the internet. I don't listen to them and return to my video blogging. Cooking is also a fascination of mine.

    Choose a past job.
    I've worked in a few places, mostly fast food.

    Choose a present job.
    Looking again, I've applied to most places though, so there aren't that many left.

    Choose a past love interest.
    I never had one. The love of my life was my ikkle Kiran. I still don't know where she is, or if she's even alive to this day.

    Choose an enemy.
    Anyone who tries to talk to me.

    Choose a pet.
    *sweet smile* Sparky. My lovely gray parrot. He's been a part of my life since I was thirteen. He was my 'starting high school' present. The one constant in my life that I wouldn't give away for anything.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    ...They always fired me 'cause I kept calling in, or I refused to 'play nice with the others'.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    ...Kiran was stolen one night during one of our parents social parties. The police never found her or the kidnapper. The only thing left was her little white heart with the black star on it.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    Video blogging, while nice, can't make me enough money. I don't have enough fans that would willingly give me money. But cooking? Who knows. Since I broke away from my parents, I don't really have enough money to go to culinary school.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    I didn't. I know that ever since my little Firefly was taken away, I've had a very hard time trusting people in the real life. The internet has become my wonderful escape from normality.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    How has Sparky NOT saved my life? He's been there through it all, the good and the bad. He loves me even when I'm in the surliest of moods.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    What would I avoid at all costs... I try to avoid r/l if it's at all possible. The internet just has so much appeal and things going for it. I keep up with my forums and my rp friends. I'm probably just going to keep doing much of the same.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    I would do anything to have Kiran back. She was my link to the real world, what kept me stable. Even if she was only six, she was still my little sister. You can't trade that for anything. I've tried to look for her myself, but I haven't found anything. I hope one day I might be able to hire a Private Investigator to find her.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    My name is Cailan. I'm about 21. I have burgundy hair that goes a little bit past my shoulders, but it's always tied back. I'm usually not seen without one of my cabby hats. I have an entire collection. All of them with a checkered heart on them. I guess I'm pretty lithe. I'm also about five feet eleven inches tall.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    Um, I used to have blond hair that had blue tips in high school. I also used to wear glasses. Kiran asked me to dye her hair so that it was like mine, so I did. We used to play Firefly and Spider together. I'm bi. My secret dream is to be a caterer. I have trust issues with authority figures, and even normal people. I tend to fall asleep at the computer and Sparky usually wakes me up.
     
  23. Firefly

    Firefly Member

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    Sorry for my absence... I've been sorting a few things out in my life and writing had to be pushed aside for a while. You know how life is. Busy. Hopefully, I won't run off again. ;)

    Heh, this is a character I thought up when I was kinda young. I kept adding and adding, and most of his history and personality came to me rather recently. I figure I'll probably stick him in a story...eventually.

    Choose a gender.

    Male

    Choose a place of birth.

    Khabarovsk, Russia

    Choose a hobby.

    Hunting

    Choose a past job.

    During his childhood, he worked at an animal shelter.

    Choose a present job.

    He could be described as a vigilante.

    Choose a past love interest.

    N/A

    Choose an enemy.

    His psychopathic father, Damian Novokov.

    Choose a pet.

    Pasha, a gyrfalcon.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?

    He moved.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?

    N/A

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?

    He has "other things" to focus on.

    How did your character make the enemy?

    Damian killed Dimitri's mother, Liliya.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?

    By freaking out, he alerted Dimitri to the presence of an enemy.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?

    He wants to avoid becoming like Damian, his maniacal, serial killer father. He has kept his distance from Damian, but Damian always seems to know where his son is. Dimitri fears that insanity runs in his family. He avoids situations in which he could become easily angered, as he worries that he might end up killing somebody. And he figures that if Damian doesn't stop following him, he'll have to turn around and face him. One of them will eventually have to die, and Dimitri is going to be sure it's Damian.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?

    He wants to live a normal life. No serial killer hunting him down, no gangs who want to blast his brains out, no blood on his hands, no hiding from the world... Just a normal, happy life. He doesn't think he can ever have that.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.

    His name is Dimitri Volkov. He is 19 years old. He is Caucasian, with reddish-brown hair and green eyes. He has a tall, muscular build, standing at 6'4". He usually has a distant look on his face; it's as if he's not completely there. He often wears a trenchcoat or an ACU. He has a scar across his face, and numerous other scars littering his body, from various encounters with unfriendly people.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.

    His father killed his mother when Dimitri was seven years old. He and his baby sister, Angela, were taken in by the Volkov family, a family who fosters children. He got along well with most of his new brothers and sisters, though it was clear that he was somewhat reclusive. He preferred to be by himself and occasionally got hostile if somebody bothered him. The Volkovs moved to America when Dimitri was 15, looking for a safer place to live than their previous home. Shortly afterward, though, it became apparent that their city wasn't as safe as they expected. The family found themselves caught in gang wars. One day, just after Dimitri's 19th birthday, Angela, at only 12 years old, was killed by a gang.
    But gang violence was the least of Dimitri's worries. Damian knew exactly where he was. Damian was determined to kill his own son for telling the authorities about what really happened to Liliya. Dimitri is going to put up a hell of a fight.
     
  24. mynameissarahgrace

    mynameissarahgrace New Member

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    Location:
    The biggest little city
    Choose a gender.
    Female

    Choose a place of birth.
    Wheeling, West Virginia

    Choose a hobby.
    Playing the harp

    Choose a past job.
    N/A

    Choose a present job.
    Plays harp for weddings, etc and music therapy groups.

    Choose a past love interest.
    Leo Bradford

    Choose an enemy.
    Rena Truby

    Choose a pet.
    Willoughby
    (English Springer Spaniel)

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    N/A


    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    He was younger than her, and she felt (at the time) like more of an older sister than a girlfriend.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    She has, pretty much.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    Rena Truby is her former harp teacher's daughter. Mrs. Truby's teenage son, Ross, became depressed, and Rena blames it on Willa (main character) - who was Ross' only friend.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    Never has...
    Willoughby is the grandpup of her late grandpa's dog. He's one of her best friends. Amazingly perceptive for an animal, and very loving and quirky.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid doing it?
    1. Losing her harp, or her passion for playing the harp. Although people who don't already know are surprised to find that she has the patience to play, it really completes her.
    2. Losing her sense of humor. She's a pretty lighthearted person, although sensitive and regrets many things she's done. She needs her laugh and her smile to get her through rough patches. She feels like it's one out of two (harp-playing is the other) things she can do to make other people feel better. Other than those two traits, she feels worthless.
    3. Losing her family and friends, obviously. But specifically her parents, and Ross.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    She'd want to have her past friends and Leo back. They were some of the only people who really understood her and loved her, she feels. She daydreams of running into them again, and starting their friendships up again like they used to be.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    Her name is Willa Swain, and she's 15 years old. Her copper-brown ringlets fall to her waist. Her eyes are navy blue, but one eye is slightly green. She has a wide smile that shows off her gums, which although beautiful she is quite sensitive about. She prefers a wry, close-lipped half-smile, but she doesn't pull it off very well. Her skin is ivory white, and after disastrous results with self-tanning lotion, she settled by constantly wearing rosy blush and bright red lipstick. You can immediately pick her out from a crowd, and while not a glamor queen she's undeniably gorgeous. Her facial structure is a lot like Rashida Jones'.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    - Tends to hold onto her past more than she should.
    - Her parents, while separated, are still best friends, which causes her to hope for them to get back together. She lives with her dad by choice, but she loves both parents the same. Her dad lives in an A-frame house in a very small "city" of Northern Ohio, and her mom lives in the mountains of the Ohio River Valley.
    - She has an older brother named Jeff who is 1.5 years older than her, and is trying to figure out who he is. Willa's always looked up to him, but is hurt by how much he's been changing lately. He's always been stable and there for her went she needed him, but it seems like he's been needing her more now.
    - She's much more of an introvert than an extrovert. She likes to stand out, but she needs time alone. She's suffering a bit from lack of self-confidence and security. She's a riot to be around once you get to know her, though.
    - She plays her harp for weddings (not her favorite; while a romanticist she hates anything too sappy, which most weddings are), parties (which shes likes sometimes, depending on who it's for), and a music therapy group (she loves this, even though it makes her feel sort of awkward.)
    - She first became hooked on harp playing when she saw a Marx brothers movie; Harpo Marx is her hero.
    - She nearly always has a beret on her head. Loves wearing unusual clothing, and she pulls it off well. She's been asked to model for art photography.
     
  25. El902

    El902 New Member

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    On another forum, it was common to answer the questions from the characters point of view. I think it helped a lot more, and it's how I'm used to doing it. So yeah. That's why :)

    Choose a gender.
    You kidding? The girls don't give it away?

    Choose a place of birth.
    I was born Kinset Arkansas. I don't think the place is even on the map, but you can try.

    Choose a hobby.
    I don't have time for hobbies usually, but when I do have time I read. Sappy, uncomplicated novels preferably. I see enough bodies and betrayal without going home to read about it.

    Choose a past job.
    I waited tables for the longest time. If you ever want to demean yourself daily, it's the profession to go for.

    Choose a present job.
    I just transferred from the Homicide Unit to Special Victims.

    Choose a past love interest.
    Too many. The most recent though was a reporter for The Daily, and no, we didn't break up because he was using me for stories. It just wasn't right, and there's no denying it when both people know it.

    Choose an enemy.
    Every criminal out there, generally. I'm not really an unlikable person, and if someone has a grudge, I don't "ignore it so it goes away". I like resolution.

    Choose a pet.
    I don't keep things that need constant attention. Did I mention that Gary - the reporter - and I were together about three years ago? Yeah.

    Why is your character not working at the old job?
    Hm. If you could choose between a fulfilling career and repeating the phrase "Hi, how are you doing today? What can I get you to drink" what would you chose? That's what I thought.

    Why is your character not with the old love interest?
    Didn't I already tell you? It just wasn't right. It might have had something to do with the fact that he'd been publishing articles about "The Injustice of the Justice System" but that wasn't completely it.

    Why does your character not make the hobby a profession?
    Because I already have a profession, and I'm pretty fond of it. I've been doing it for damn near twelve years, so I should.

    How did your character make the enemy?
    I told you I didn't have one, apart from criminals. They became my enemy the day I joined the academy.

    How did the pet once save the character's life?
    Well, my old dog Lassie once made a rope out of her fur and pulled me from a well.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything to avoid? Why? What has he already done to avoid this? What do you see him doing in the future to avoid it?
    I like to avoid milk, for one thing. Lactose Intolerance can be a bitch sometimes. Other than that, I don't like spilling my guts unless I'm under oath or am otherwise compelled not to lie.

    What is the one thing in the world your character would do anything in the world to have? Why? What has he already done to try to obtain it? What does he hope to try in the future?
    I would give my right thumb to have the patience to sit through a Hannah Montana concert. My niece has been begging me for months to take her, and I just can not do it.

    What is your character's name? What is your character's age, and physical description.
    My name is Peyton, I'm thirty five, and I'm in shape. You don't need to know any more than that.

    Write everything else you know about your character, right now.
    I don't like the way our system works some times. The fact that a criminal can get off because evidence was found after trial, and double jeopardy is attached. My old partner in Homicide told me that after so many years the bodies would just be bodies, victims would be victims, and I would be able to work a case without getting attached. That hasn't happened yet, and I don't think it will. After all these years, I'm still getting grilled for what my captain calls "going too far". Apparently, it's only my job to get justice for the victim, and that means doing whatever is in my power as a detective. Although that's part of it, I don't think it should be considered wrong to sit at a victims house because she heard something outside the window at three a.m. Nor do I think middle-of-the-night house calls to check under a woman's six-year-old son's bed for monsters is wrong (Johnathan didn't want his mommy to be eaten, and only the Police Woman could get the monster. You bet your ass I got that monster). I may get "too attached" sometimes, but cops are supposed to be the citizens protectors, and putting away the bad guys isn't the only way we can protect.

    About eight months after I got my gold badge, I started taking classes at a community college for psychology. I can't even count how many classes I missed because of work, but it did help with profiling the perps, for lack of a better term.

    I don't know what else I can tell you, considering I'm in my first stages and El is a major procrastinator. When we know more about me, I'll be the first to let you know ;)
     

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