I would like your opinions on a plot change I'm considering In my current concept, my heroes are persuing kidnappers unaware they are the ones being kidnapped. What if they were instead setting up their own kidnapping to bait a trap for the kidnappers? The kids will basically choreograph their own kidnapping and magically plant it into the dreams of the mysterious ringleader. The concept will have them saving the world some how and return to Earth with a higher ransom value from the world they saved. Expecting a hero's welcome, they are instead subdued with ether, loaded into a moving van, injected with a powerful sedative and taken away to be held for said "ransom." Renee will cast a spell to make them temporarily immune to the ether. Thus still conscious, Beverly can use her hypnotic voice to stop the injections. Pretending to be unconscious, they will be taken to the kidnappers lair. Even if they put on the light reflecting jumpsuits, it'll take over an hour before their powers are neutralized. Plenty of time to bust the ringlead and save the kidnapped heiress. What could possibly go wrong? Something does and they end up being caught in their own trap. Should I stick with the original concept or use the change?