(I don't know if there's a similar thread, I had a quick look but couldn't see one, but if there is, feel free to merge/point to me where it is.) In my writing, I often have the problem of conveying emotion. I tend to get the 'put more emotion into your writing, how does the character really feel' etc. feedback. I know that one way of helping with this is to think about how I feel when I'm say angry, upset, happy etc. and incorporate that into my writing, but I still feel that I'm struggling. It may be because I'm quite a private person myself and don't really show my feelings much, or something, but I don't know. I just wondered what you did to ensure that you conveyed emotion. Do you do what I mentioned above, or is there another way? Is it just natural for you? It'd be really helpful if you could enlighten me!