Hello people, I am trying to introduce some day dreaming into my 3rd person narrative (which is a little bit out of my comfort zone), my character is in a conversation, but during each pause she's thinking about something else, where her imagination is wondering. Essentially she's multitasking between thought and speech...that is if it's a realistic thing for somebody to do. Though I am wondering if my method is effective. I would post up my work for review, but this is something I would rather try to get published (once it's refined), so I'll just take an extract instead: The character is thinking has been reading The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe before a doctor visits her and she starts thinking about the character of Aslan and heads down a train of thought to do with 'big cats'. Do you think it's a bit too disjointed or do you think it reflects a distracted mind exploring a train of thought? I am unsure myself. If it's not effective enough, how would I make it more so? Thank you.