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    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Shira, Mar 1, 2013.

    i really need help. i need a story about a 17 year old and a 70 year old
     
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    And...?
     
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    You need to write one, or you need to read one? :confused:
     
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    ...and fries with that and coke .. no wait make it diet
     
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    A cheeseburger, too?
     
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    I thought we were ordering a 17 and 70 year old... but if your buying sure i never turn down free food :D
     
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    Try Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. The protagonist is 17, and the antagonist is, at least, 70.

    But you won't know what in the damned hell is going on if you didn't read the previous six books.

    But other books featuring a young teen and an elderly?

    Hmm...

    The Cay, though the kid's 12, not 17... The old man is in his 70s, though.

    Lemme see...what else...

    Er...no dice, I'm afraid.

    But seriously, you're the writer. It's your job to figure out the plot and what these two will end up doing.
     
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    How about a 70 year old grandparten and a 17 year old grandchild.
     
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    A 17 year old drinking 70 year old whisky perhaps? Or wait, he is not old enough to drink. Make that a 70 year old man drinking 17 year old whisky then. I'm still just as clueless as to what you want to write though
     
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    Next time, don't put off your homework until the last minute.
     
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    Next time, find out what's going wrong because your homework never wounded you. You're late on the job of getting things done? Never too late to start. What's a grandparten going for these days?

    I'd say try Sparksnotes knockoffs, but maybe that won't do it for you.
    !7 yr old hooker and a 70 yr old pope-to-be
     
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    Once there was a beautiful 17 year old girl. A 70 year old man gave her cash for sex. The end.

    This is a short story. If you want to make it a longer one you can add a description of positions and dialog during sex of your choice. Personally i would go with the clam as it is a pleasant change from the norm.
     

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