So, of course there's no rule for why some sentences are so wonderful and others or dull or boring. But I had a notion based on detail. I used to try to paint a very vivid picture for my reader, and felt like the more detail I would add the more they could feel a part of the story. Now I'm starting to feel differently. I am starting to think that it is better to give them a general idea, and let their imagination do the rest. Otherwise you are confining them to something very specific that they have to envision, but it is much more fun as a reader to create your own world based on the guidlines given. It also allows your reader to draw forth their own experiences more and use their imagination, making for a more fun read. Thoughts?