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    Diary entry

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by @ethanlovatic, Oct 12, 2013.

    I am writing a diary entry but telling a story at the same time but somehow I am finding it hard to describe what she is wearing and what her surrondings are?
     
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    need to be more specific...

    is the person who's writing the diary entry also telling the story in first person?

    or is the story being told from another pov and includes diary entries, for some reason?

    and are you having trouble describing appearance/surroundings in the diary entries, or in the story?
     

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