1. Andres

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    Need some feedback on writing

    Discussion in 'Support & Feedback' started by Andres, Oct 14, 2020.

    Hi there,

    I'm an independent artist who's creating a short biography on my personal project. English is not my first language so I'd like to know if this could be the correct place where I can share my Short biography and get some good feedback on structure, phrasing, feel and grammar in general. If not, I do apologize for misplacing the comment.
     
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    English is the only language I know and I've been speaking it for 30 years. I'm not a linguist and I don't have a degree in literature, but I'm willing to help you in terms of having it sound organic.

    Your english does seem fine, from that short paragraph. You're welcome to pm me.
     
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