Hi! I'm faced in an assignment with a challenge to write a story that begins with a paragraph containing a 'hook'. My Teacher says if the begining doesn't interest her we automaticly get less than 50% Thank you for any Help! “Yes ma’am and sir please just follow me and Dr. Reid will come shortly.” The kind nurse guided the two worried parents through the disturbing halls of the psychiatric ward. “Wait in this room please.” She shut the cold door behind them. In minutes, the doctor came into the room. “Am I talking to a Mr. and Mrs. Pike?” They both nodded numbly in reply. “Yes well this is a strange case at the least.” “Is she going to be alright? I promised Sara that I would take good care of her when I agreed to adopt her!” The room was filled with an uneasy silence and the doctor began to breathe shallow breaths. “What did you say she claimed to be capable of?” he asked wearily. “She says she can talk with her toys.” Mr. Pike told the doctor. “Well that is not what she told me,” Dr. Reid began, “she said that she could control them and make them move.” Mr. and Mrs. Pike looked at each other while Dr. Reid let out a nervous laugh. The doctor tensed up as he spoke “But with all that aside, to put it short, she said she could watch them float at her command and quite frankly, I saw them float too.” Tell me what you think! Thank you for all your help!