"With his blonde hair and bright green eyes, most people would say Tyler is an attractive young guy. He's smart, sensitive, he can write poetry and play the guitar. He's the kind of guy any girl would love to be with. But life isn't all sunshine and rainbows. tyler grew up in intercity New York. His father was an abusive raging alcoholic and his mother worked 3 jobs just to support them. When he was 11 his father's abuse got out of hand and he was lucky to escape alive. From that point on he was free of the abuse but it's a long road to recovery. Now in his 20's he struggles to come to terms with the past and make a better life for himself. With the support of his loving girlfriend and close friends he soon finds love truly is the best medicine." Is it something that would draw people in and make them want to read my story? how can I make it better?