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    DvnMrtn and igalic ~ Joint Poetry Contest (107) Winners

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Mar 22, 2010.

    Hate's Conquest
    DvnMrtn


    They came for me in the night,
    and filled me with their loathing,
    Their hate.

    A primal urge I had to fight,
    as they tortured me through the night,
    that pierced my fleshy clothing,
    the whipping, grinding, and mashing that was,
    Their hate.

    Only man, I slowly gave,
    a piece of me they whipped and slaved,
    through the fiery pain that was,
    Their hate.

    By dawn it had consumed me round,
    closed my eyes and broke new ground,
    as a part of me flew away forevermore,
    with the ravens of nevermore,
    they filled me with,
    My Hate.

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    Ice-covered sea
    By igalic


    The nectar
    That was running through my veins
    Giving me life
    Turned to poison
    Finds no way out

    Decaying
    Dying on the inside
    I don’t give up
    Stomping the ground I stand on
    No other side to break through

    The ice-covered sea
    Now remains my only hope
     
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    Congrats to both of you!! Good job! :)
     
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    Grats. :)

    Those are quite interesting to behold.
     
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