Hello all! So my current WIP takes place in future America where all the creatures of myth (vampires, demons, etc) have come out of the closet and are trying to become active members in society. I have two MC's, one who is a human female and another male "creature." The story starts off with a riot, where the creatures of myth attack humans who are actively trying to imprison the creatures. My human MC gets separated from her family and ends up getting chased by a demon that is trying to kill her. I have her getting saved by my creature MC, and she grows attracted to him after a few days. She ends up asking to be changed to his kind in Chapter 4. But I was wondering if that was too slow to start the novel.. I thought of having my human MC getting chased and severely wounded by the demon. So my creature MC saves her by changing her to his kind. I feel it would make the beginning more interesting.. But is that too cliche? Human is dying so a creature changes her to save her life (like Twilight... ugh)? I could make it work either way, I just think the second way is better. Opinions?