Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Banzai
    Offline

    Banzai One-time Mod, but on the road to recovery Contributor

    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2007
    Messages:
    12,871
    Likes Received:
    150
    Location:
    Reading, UK

    Elexander - Weekly Poetry Contest (174) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Dec 18, 2011.

    a Vague Mist of Matter
    By Elexander


    the aftermath’s constant arrival
    unfolds, preceding
    even a glimpse to perceive

    after all : before known

    no other than here,
    currently now, present;
    I am.
    thus, we may simply be

    inevitably, those who strive to ask
    walk hand and hand in
    a forest of burden,
    a field of strife to lay
    with the unknown

    question will stir you
    into assumption, deceptive absolutes

    instead, Be.
    do not know,
    flow at will,
    as all
    of all
    Ubiquitous is bliss

    allow full flux,
    flowing with the contingent
    flowing with the change
    able to embrace wholeness
    able to dissolve pain
    .

    the deepest point of sea Is still among the shore
     
  2. Elexander
    Offline

    Elexander New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 10, 2011
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    1
    Dustin Elexander : Central Michigan

    white.jpg
     
  3. L a u r a
    Offline

    L a u r a Senior Member

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2011
    Messages:
    163
    Likes Received:
    3
    Location:
    USA
    Congrats! Great poem. :)
     
  4. anibnani1
    Offline

    anibnani1 New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 12, 2011
    Messages:
    1
    Likes Received:
    0
    You did a fantastic job here! Your final line of " the deepest point of the sea is still among the shore" is so captivating.
     
  5. Cacian
    Offline

    Cacian Banned

    Joined:
    Oct 25, 2011
    Messages:
    1,907
    Likes Received:
    5
    well done Elexander..great read!!
     
  6. Novemberfire11
    Offline

    Novemberfire11 New Member

    Joined:
    Sep 17, 2010
    Messages:
    10
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    NY
    What this poem conveys and how you convey it is beautiful...
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page