1. Tyler Danann
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    Elipsis and speech capitalization.

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by Tyler Danann, Dec 19, 2014.

    First of all, a big thanks to those helping me in the other threads. It is appreciated.

    I've nearly finished editing, but one last little query I have is with the elipsis and speech.

    For example:

    "War is inevitable, but not between allies, without them Terra is finished. If this world falls I...” Her words faded as she turned from him to face the recently lit fire.

    Should it be Her or her after the elipsis?
     
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    Capital H. The speech is finished. The last is a stand-alone sentence.
     
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