Small part of my story involves a character that would be considered "evil" rather than insane. In the small section dealing with this character, I sort of want to peek at him and give the impression that solidifies this. Yes it is important to express he is evil, not insane. I'm trying to break the ice at this point but can't think of the right idea to spin a web from. I'm hoping someone has something, like a good single sentence to a few sentences that just makes it click. I'm not asking anyone to write for me, so don't get the wrong idea. I'm just hoping for something to give me some inspiration, a good metaphor or analogy maybe. It seems a very simple concept, maybe that's why it's bugging me. It seems so simple that I keep writing and deleting the first few sentences over and over... *sigh* Thanks!