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  1. Korizan

    Korizan Member

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    This is not really an exercise. To be honest I am writing a short story (fantasy). I am trying to create a person, a young adult, don’t want to tell too much about it right now. Anyways, I am trying to make an anagram name of the following: White Dragon. The best name I came up with is Darwin Hitergo. This idea is very similar to Lord Voldemort - Tom Marvolo Riddle in the Harry Potter.
     
  2. BayView

    BayView Huh. Interesting. Contributor

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    Yes, it IS very similar to that!
     
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    DeadMoon The light side of the dark side Contributor

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    For some odd reason, Darwin makes me think of that old cartoon Dark wing duck -a spin off of Duck tails. ahhh I miss the older cartoons....
     
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    BayView Huh. Interesting. Contributor

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    Wait, Wade Hartigan doesn't work, does it? too many "a"s.
     
  5. GingerCoffee

    GingerCoffee Web Surfer Girl Contributor

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    White Dragon:

    Drew Thagion
    Drew O'Thaign

    Those were mine but this is the site you need: Anagram Generator.

    Those are words, not names, but they expand your imagination for names.
     
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  6. James Random

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    Hitergo sounds like it's trying to be Spanish or Latin-American to me. Sounds like it might sound more at home being spelled Hiergo (He-er-go)
     
  7. Korizan

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    i like that ine
     
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    GingerCoffee Web Surfer Girl Contributor

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    ine?
     
  9. Korizan

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    ***name
     
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    GingerCoffee Web Surfer Girl Contributor

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    :D
     
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    Wade Hartigan and Drew O'Thaign - I like them both :D The first sounds tough and adventurous, and the second sounds handsome and noble. Both sound capable and strong.
     
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    Deano Wright?

    Back to the OP...how is Hitergo pronounced...does the first syllable rhyme with white, or sit? Or, maybe, it's one of those names where "the P is silent, as in long grass".
     
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    Theo Wingard?
     
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    BayView Huh. Interesting. Contributor

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    Oooh, new favourite!
     
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    KaTrian A foolish little beast. Contributor

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    Hitergo makes me think of Hidalgo, so I'm thinking of Latino. It also reminds me of two verbs, hither and go, oddly joined together in hither-go.

    I like Theo Wingard and Drew O'Thaign :cool:. Wade Hartigan is a cool name and does sound like an explorer, but it's not an anagram of White Dragon, is it?
     
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    You could go with the Latin:- Albus Draco, but those two names seem strangely familiar to me...
     
  17. Korizan

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    i think i will stick to Drew O'Thaign. Thank you very much for this name.
     
  18. Korizan

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    i have began my story, it sounds pretty good, think,
    this is what i got so for my main character so far:
    Basic Statistics

    Character
    Name: Drew O'Thaign

    Age: 19
    Hometown: Australia Alice Springs
    Current Residence: Belfast England
    Occupation: Senior High school student
    Income: no income
    Talents/Skills: Soccer, Moi Thai
    Birth order: November 1, 2003
    Siblings: parents, only child

    Physical Characteristics:

    Height:6ft
    Weight: 160lb
    Race: Caucasian
    Eye Color: black
    Hair Color: black
    Glasses or contact lenses? non
    Skin color: white
    Shape of Face: round
    Mannerisms: very polite
    Habits: (smoking, drinking etc.) not smoking, not drinking
    Health: very good health, physically fit
    Hobbies: military obstacle course training – parkour

    tell me what more you want to know about this character, to know him better
    thanks.
     
  19. BayView

    BayView Huh. Interesting. Contributor

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    I don't want to know anything more about him, not on its own.

    I want to read about him DOING something. I can learn most of what I want to know by seeing what he does and how he does it, not by reading a description.
     
  20. Korizan

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    got it. ill post something soon
     
  21. Catrin Lewis

    Catrin Lewis Contributor Contributor Community Volunteer Contest Winner 2023

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    One little thing you might want to correct: Belfast is in Northern Ireland, not England. Lotta people wouldn't be too happy with the suggestion it was . . . :eek:

    Other than that, love the parkour.
     
  22. Korizan

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    Thamks
     

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