*sigh* So my sister got back from vacation and offered her opinion on my work, right? SHE was the demographic I was aiming for: teenaged girls. My other two beta readers (both guys, one around 30, the other around 40) did NOT like the work but primarily it was because of the character (whom I'll probably still have to fix up, but a little fix up and a complete re-write are two different beasts). If I take the other two older guys' advice, I'm looking at a major re-write with possibly major story changes (one of which would even include changing the narrative to focus on the other MC), but they're not the group I was focusing on. With teenaged girls as the targeted demographic, can anyone point me to such a beta group?