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  1. jmhoffer

    jmhoffer Contributing Member

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    Finish the sentence! lol

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by jmhoffer, Jul 3, 2013.

    I'm having trouble with making one sentence. Following the physical description of a daemon, I focus on his feet, which are the only characteristic that make him look anything other than human.

    "It was the only physical feature that"

    I want the sentence to outright say that this is a daemon. Not just, "It was the only physical feature that made him look anything other than human." It has to say 'daemon' somewhere in that sentence, but I'm not sure how to write it without it sounding cheesy.
     
  2. jmhoffer

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    Nevermind, I figured it out, heh heh.
     

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