Hi, I am a bit conflicted about the text below, to me it sounds good but I am afraid that it may come of as generic and won't sound like something a real person would write. What you need to know, concerning the background, is that the text is a note from mother to son. Many days ago the MC's mother and father was killed and had to flee his home town. The Vaan is the indigenous people in this story and a young Vaan woman saved his life and brought him to her hidden village. “Dear Fendrael, if you read this there is a strong possibility that I and your father is dead. I know this must be confusing for you, but you must stay brave, because the book you are holding is more important than you may realise. Unfortunately, the answers you seek would be meaningless if I told them to you. Therefore you must seek them out yourself and grow, become a fine young man and learn more about the world. Make reliable friends that will help you during your darkest hours and make your journey a happy experience. By now you must be familiar with the Vaan. Yes I have seen how you have been seeking answers on your own and it makes me so proud. The Vaan is the key to discovering the secrets of this world. Seek out their hidden villages, ask about the temples that holds the truth. Present the book and those truths will be revealed to you. Whatever happens to us, know that we will always love you and watch over you. Good luck my dearest son. Stay safe.” I changed the text completely and posted it below.