Hi, I have been messing around with this Fantasy story for a while, and I am only about 10 000 words in, but I cannot decide if I want to go with first, second or third person, or maybe both? I figure I should make a decision before I continue writing and I want your opinion of these pieces of text. Sorry that the text is out of context. Second person You nod a bit uncomfortably and leaves the house with the rest of his classmates. Outside you see your classmates gathering together to say goodnight. You think to yourself that you kind of envy their casual relationship towards each other, and wishes them a good night as well while walking away, unsure if anyone have heard you. After walking a few meters, you hear someones say, “good night Fendrael”. You turn your head around towards the person that responded to you, surprised for the response, you are greeted by Yve´s smiling face. she repeats the words and walks away towards her house. A bit flustered, you notice Isac and Androu staring at you from afar, apparently they have been arguing with each other since you left the Grand Masters house. While smiling you move out of their sight as soon as possible to not antagonise them even further. Just to be safe, you walk down the the main street of the residential area for the nobles, hoping that you would not be attacked in the ray of the street lights. The city is divided into four layers, each layer is built on top of the lower layers. The noble residential area is located on the third layer, close to the Palace on the top layer. -skips a few sections Third Person It only takes a few minutes for Fendrael to get from the Grand masters house to his family´s house. Since the nobel residential area is 300 meter above sea level there is a great view of almost the entire city from Fendraels house. While at home, Fendrael notices that his father is going through some paper work as usual at this time of day. He do not trust anyone but himself so he insists to double check the paper work himself. At the other side of the room Fendrael finds his mother reading "the" book, a book that she has been reading for as long as Fendrael can remember. I don't know what the book is called or what it is about, it is written in a strange language and sometimes I wonder if even my mother understands what she is reading. She has told me in the past that the book is a treasured heirloom of our family but will not tell anything more about it, until I get older. First person My dad is the first to notice that I am home, he turns his head towards me and smiles for a second before returning to his paper work. He asks how the lecture was, while simultaneously looking through the papers. I don't mind that he does this because I know here really do care what happens in my life. Afterwards my mother is awoken from her book and looks over at me, she stands up and gives me the cup of hot chocolate and welcomes me home. Even though she seem to be lost in her own world most of the time, she still manages to have a cup of hot chocolate ready for me. I asked her about how she does this several times, but the answer is always the same. “A mother simply knows”, was her response, whatever that means. My family is part of the red tribe, and pure blooded, which makes us a noble family. Our tribe was apparently the smallest but also the strongest when we first settle on these lands, the first emperor was someone from the read tribe, and the supreme commander of the invasion army. Our kind, and other pure bloods are becoming fewer because of inter marriages between other tribes. Race has never been an big issue for me, but I can understand the desire to avoid our our kind from truly disappearing. Even though there is nothing different between other peoples other than eye colour, as far as I know.