Hi all, I bet there aren't many people here with a native tongue other than English, but I'm here so I might be wrong about that. I'm a twenty-nine year old Entrepreneur/Family company man, with somewhat limited free time. Or at the very least my life is anything but consistent as a result. But I've always been a bit of an aspiring writer. When writing fiction I prefer English over my native language. In my early twenties I've been part of a few role playing communities, but the past six or so years I've been a bit out of touch with my creative self. Last week I've found a bit more time on my hands, business is in a bit of a rut, not much to do for the moment and nothing that can be done about it. So much free time in fact that I had enough time that I could do all I wanted to do and had plenty of time left to spare. As a result of boredom, I started writing out of the blue. No direction in mind or anything of that sort, experiencing the story that I write as I am writing it. I linked it on a personality forum I'm active on as I was writing it, just to get some comments on it, and got some positive reviews. Considering I started it all rather half-assed, I started thinking maybe I should try and develop my ability. Anyhow, I did a google search and found these forums. So here I am, hoping to find some worth-while critique and to learn a bit about writing fiction.