I'm nearing the 100-page milestone and have decided to read over my work. Something I've noticed is that my work isn't an abstract story or a loose explanation, it's a direct account of events. And right now I'm finding it hard to tell said story without it feeling like a list- he did this and then he did that, and son on. How can I fix this? I do split it up with deep and insightful paragraphs and overall I do think it's still very well written, I just don't want it to feel like you're reading a simple list of events.